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The sun shines on every couple,
a rainbow as vivid as a dream.
Their hearts as happy as a bright summers day,
the hopes, they feel soaring higher than deep blue skies.

Every path lit up by their presence,
and every flower blooming with love.
The smiles they share are never ending,
like the mysterious chemistry that binds them within.

Arms intertwine in a loving embrace,
like the woven green of a daisy chain.
The endless sparkle in their eyes,
reflects like the sun in a still, silver lake.

But here I stand in a dark corner,
a cloud of gloom raining down on my head.
My thoughts are a turbulent storm of sadness,
there is no one to pull me out of the raging waters.

Tormenting rapids of despair,
drag me in to the black, lonely river.
Murkiness shrouds me wherever I swim,
making me drown in my own lonely sorrow.

My beacon of love is faint like the mist,
forever cold as the frost on my heart.
A frozen chamber locked up within me,
my love, the key bearer lost in the snow.
Cascading, seething balls of rage,
raining from the shattered heavens.
Hail of embers strike the earth,
awake, the plague of searing heat.

Abandon ye all who have faith,
for all creation shall turn to ash.
Behold the burning, crackling sword,
cometh the orange angel of death.

Twisting, turning deadly menace,
heed the beast of fiery wrath.
Merciless wave of pure destruction,
marks the searing path he crawls.

Scorching blade of ravaging flame,
carves the scar into mother earth.
Untainted beauty she is no more,
End of creation all in his hand.
No matter how much they tell me I never feel a thing,
I am struggling so hard to find the beauty within.
The odd one out, the ugly duckling, the thorn in the side
I am the ghost of a person whenever I venture outside.
The smiles I try to give return cold glares of stone,
is this really why I am feeling so alone?

My confidence is a mere speck of dust amongst the wind,
my self esteem a ball of trash already it's been binned.
A heavy burden on my back refuses to let go,
when I try to see how good I look my mind just tells me no.
I think of things I shouldn't say that that throw me off the wall,
like why would any girl love me or look at my face at all?

I know it sounds ridiculous but that's just how I feel,
there is more I haven't seen that I have yet to reveal.
So many things I cannot see and so I just assume,
I am not much to look at nor can I make a girl swoon.
I may be wrong but as for now this is how it seems,
girls only compliment me whilst I'm deep in my dreams.
Not handsome
Been a while since I've written anything poetic, so here's a rant about my feelings. In poetic form!
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Aaron
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A fan-fiction author, and poet.

Alongside that I'm a fan of animé and manga.


My various other hobbies are bike riding, roller blading, working out, reading, writing, badminton, gaming and technology.

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Current Residence: England, North London
Favourite genre of music: VGM and Drum and Bass, Complextro, Rock
Favourite style of art: Furry, animé
Operating System: Windows 7 Ultimate
Favourite cartoon character: Sonic the Hedgehog
Personal Quote: If you can be seen, you can be hit, if you can be hit, you can be killed...
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:icongonzo22:
gonzo22 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Happy Birthday
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rainchibi Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
loving your poetry!!
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gonzo22 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Happy Birthday
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Jokiu Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
Hai buddy! Didn't know you had a DeviantArt account.
I see you're more of a writer in here. Nice!
Can't wait to start reading!
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carricaburu Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student General Artist
U GOT TAGGED!!! [link]
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FoxDesigns93 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're FJ's own theorangefox aren't you?
Ahhhh I found you! :D
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ArcticFox501 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
forgot to watch you a long time ago lol so i did now
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DoomXWolf Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the favorite
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RollingTomorrow Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012   General Artist
:la: Welcome to :iconwriters--club:! :la:

:typerhappy: We're glad to have you as a member and look forward to seeing your contributions! :typerhappy:

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hikaru-nara-kheel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome to the club :iconyoungpoets: !! We hope to see your amazing poems in the club! We are always open to suggestions about the club, please note us is you have a suggestions...^.^... thank you and have a nice day!
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